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Paradise-Lost Application: Finley 'Tracy' Caesidy by marimariakutsu Paradise-Lost Application: Finley 'Tracy' Caesidy by marimariakutsu

edit 6: Updates regarding the more recent RPs (they involve relationships, likes, dislikes and trivia)

edit 5: More updates with the likes and dislikes, trivia and relationships 

edit 4: Finley's glass eye ref and (written) cyborg anatomy have been added.

edit 3: Hopefully I fixed and edited Finley's bio enough to remain accepted. Also I'm adding "relationships" and making Finley's secret more known as well.

edit 2: REDESIGNED Finley's Doll design~ The previous one made the kid look constricted ;;;u;;; Another batch of updates will happen soon. It will be the description. 

edit: GUESS WHAT?! I GOT IN!!!!! :la: And...due to the Health Committee's superior *coughCiciough*, I added another name for my character....well I was meaning to change Tracy's family name tho~
(( Tracy does not approve of the change!
    Mari: Yeah but remember, the order came from your superior.
    Tracy: But--
  Mari: Don't worry, I didn't make a big of a change ^^
    Tracy: ... Well then, Tracy is bloody jolly that Tracy can still call Tracy "Tracy" D:<))

†  Name: Finley "Tracy" Caesidy

† Alias/Doll: Druida [Druida= “druid” in another language]

 †Class: C

 †Arcana Lineage: The Hierophant

 † Faction: Health Committee

 † Age: 13 

  †Gender: No Biological Sex (N/A) 

 Rank: Private

 † Height: 150 cm

 † Weight: 1000 kg (because of bionic machinery)

 † Blood Type: AB (by default)

 † Nationality: English (either British-American/American-Briton)

 † Year: Freshman

†  X- Holow: A glass eye/ Barnaby (it can be behind Finley's eyepatch at times; the eyepatch is a decoy. The eye is currently in the possession of Barnaby, Finley 'stuffed' owl) Reference:


 † Weapon: Atra-Xerxes

      A gun-cannon that is capable of the following abilities:  

    *Gun Creation & Gun Manipulation:Finley can summon Atra-Xerxes at will and from thin air. The reason why this is possible is because Finley is a being capable of manipulating Light energy and is able mold the gun into any size, shape and form Finley desires. Often in its primary form (see Doll) its true form (see Weapon) is only possible when Finley's emotions need to be stable enough and is in Doll form. Finley likes to occasionally turn the gun into pistols, flintlocks or rifles for transport or for maneuverability

    *Projectile Enhancement (Missile Generation, Scatter Shot, Light Infusion): The gun shoots compressed light energy which Finley can still manipulate even while each shot is still fired. Each shot can come out as a ball of yellow light, a myriad of smaller shots in succession or a single blast that can blow up anything that comes in contact with it. 



Past 1:

Finley was the child of a London-born stockbroker who worked at the New York Stock Exchange.  The man made his riches analysing stocks and has reserved a quarter of his earnings to pay off his for child's special kind of treatments. Finley inherited a virus from the father’s beloved which made Finley experience being hospitalized at a young age. The father spoiled his child but had given Finley so much company, stories, books and love to not let the kid go rotten or succumb to loneliness for too long. There were even a lot of kids in the hospital to play with (before they died of their respective diseases or were discharged because their health was way better). While visiting Finley whenever he could, the father used all of his connections to find the right people who could rid Finley of a nearly incurable sickness.

When Finley’s condition got critical, associates  from a pharmaceutical company came forth and told the father that they can help the child. The father paid them a fortune in hopes to see the child healthy, but it was all a scheme. The company kidnapped Tracy to conduct various experiments on a worthy subject, thus separating the father from the child. Once Finley woke up, the associates told the child that they replaced some body parts with bionic prosthetics that were deemed illicit. Frightened at how much was changed, Finley unwittingly fused the Light Magic that was locked in the kid and altered the parts into weapons powerful enough to wipe the company off the face of the earth. The only thing Fin could remember from this was the guilt of killing those people even if they deserved their deaths. 


Past 2:

Finley was the youngest child of an American pastor and his wife whose four older children had already left the household. The remainder of the family moved from the US to the UK when Finley was a baby because of the father’s missionary work. Unlike most kids in the block, who were more outgoing, Finley was an oddity among them, preferring to meet only a few of those in class and getting to know more of the neighbors from different countries and those outside their church. Finley’s father was the town’s pastor who was said to be true to his faith. But nonetheless, the pastor valued life and sought for peace, thus he tolerated the presence of those from different religions.

The father and the mother were very particular though into teaching Finley not to get involved with fighting or starting them. Finley was unfortunate to have gotten involved in a few pummels, though, having stood up for the bullied kids or having been teased for being just as odd. Finley learned how to keep secrets because of these fights—Finley didn’t want mother and father to know that their little one got into a fight.

Finley was content with things as they were. That was until the police came to their doorstep and passed on the message that all children within a given age range were to be brought to a special hospital for checkup. Many parents in the neighborhood followed, but not Finley’s. Finley’s parents were unconvinced and asked more questions and demanded answers. The police became irritated by this and began beating the folks when they refused to give their child away. Finley was then taken and the parents were arrested. On the way, Finley was weeping profusely, pleading for everyone to be brought back to their normal lives, before the Finley and the cartel of children arrived in the said hospital.

The said hospital’s main goal was to turn the children into cyborgs but the process was dangerous and some of the methods involved that some of organs or body systems (i.e. lymph system, circulatory system) be removed or modified. The children were subjected to tortures that were physical, emotional and psychological to make them manipulated enough to accept their given aliases and to get them to be laid on the operating table. Of all the dozens of children who were already operated on, Finley was the only one who survived all of the modifications. When Finley saw the change, and heard that many children would still undergo similar process, Finley decided that enough was enough and caused enough destruction in the hospital to free everyone held captive and kill all those who were mistreating all of the youths.  

 However, as the kids saw Finley in that new form, they start getting scared and avoided Finley for the body's capabilities were beyong Finley's control. As the kids fled and left Finley crying at how much of a monster they called their former friend, Finley lost consciousness and the next thing Finley knew was waking up in the Academy.

† Skills:

*Keen Intellect

*Light Manipulation (Elemental Power)

*Tea and Coffee Brewing

*Singing like a trap

*Keen in observation,analysis and tactics during a battleIntuition

*Knowledgeable on a number of thingsand quite studious

*Marksmanship when wielding a gun  

*Power Mimicry but only possible as Druida

NOTE: The kinds of Mimicry Finley has is Observational Mimicry and Aura Mimicry. Finley can imitate other abilites but the catch is that they have to be light-based and Finley has to master them if keeping them is wanted. 

† Personality: Introspective | Peace-loving | Wise | Polite| Respectful Towards Elders| Gullible| Secretive| Intuitive| Blunt

Despite appearing quite, Finely acts polite and well-mannered unless angered. Finley becomes loyal and acts accordingly to anyone who is called comrade and/or superior. Tracy doesn’t like to participate in conflict; however that won't mean Tracy cannot approach the fray when rightfully commanded or when assistance is desperately needed. Finley is often reluctant when it comes to being brutally honest and yet the youth can still voice out what is in mind sometimes and is usually never empty of an opinion about anyone. However, Finley is still too kind-natured and still has little of anything rude to call anyone.

Finley is a wide-reader and likes to indulge in novels, which has given way for the kid’s large vocabulary and bouts to give philosophical statements without warning.

Since Finley is one of the youngest in the school and values the respect towards elders and superiors, Finley regularly bows to someone and always gives someone a title—It will be ‘sir’ for the boys, ‘miss’ for the girls and respective titles for Committee members. Finley can comply if someone requests something different from the aforementioned titles and is tolerant of any nickname given to address the child, just as long as it does't aggravate Finley. Finley has an naive view that whoever is in charge was place in such a position because that person is the most trustworthy, thus they deserve respect and obedience from privates. This lets Finley became a frequent victim to certain pranks or jokes. The reason for Finley being highly respectable to those older could be because 1.) Besides the Past 1!father who was very loving towards Finley, Past 1’s hospitals had staff members who were obviously older than Finley and were respectable individuals due to the patience and kindness they exhibited towards their patients, Finley included; or 2.) Past 2’s hospitals had the older kids be the ones to tell Finley and a select few to carve their names on the dog tags they smuggled in and stood up for the smaller children whenever the hospital's abusive staff members were to hurt them.

Whatever the past was, Finley appreciated what these older individuals did. 

Whenever Finley feels threatened, a hand would go over the eye patch side of the kid’s face or the youngster shivers behind the cloak worn. What gives Finley comfort is the scent of tea and/or, the presence of the plushie owl Barnaby, and the company of friends. Nonetheless, Finley likes to have time to be alone to reflect, to read or to recharge.

Being a cyborg is something Finley wants to keep a secret from everyone because the kid believes that everyone will start treating Finley as a monster and neglect the humanity that is left in him/her. Finley cannot determine his/her own gender because both pasts had to remove Finley’s reproductive system and genitals to complete the cyborg body. What makes Finley feel left out the most is that everyone is capable of drinking and Finley is not—whenever any liquid gets through the outer layer and get in contact with the neurons that directly feed live electric signals to many organs they are attached to, the electric current that gives the body increased performance will short circuit and can potentially kill Finley.

Finley refers self as ‘Tracy’ because of two possibilities: 1.) The father in past 1 wanted to name his first child ‘Tracy’ because it reminds him of his grandfather and grandmother (both named Terrance and Theresa). But when his wife died, she became Finley’s namesake (her name being Fionnlagh; ‘Finley' is a derived name of it). During the early years of Finley's hospitalization, the father kept his Finley company and shared many stories to the child, one of them being with Finley almost being named ‘Tracy.’  Hearing this, Finley swore to refer self as ‘Tracy’ from then on so that the father will have the child Finley’s mother and father always wanted to have. 2.) The hospital in Past 2 brainwashed the children into referring themselves with the aliases they gave them, inducing  a daily routine of torture methods to do so. Most children received the same treatment they were given the first time they were admitted and for Finley it was the electric shock. The only reason why Finley was able to remember was because Finley had a dog tag in hand that had ‘Finley Caesidy’ scratched on it. Despite Finley remembering, Finley cannot stop referring self as 'Tracy' due to the amount of damage already done. 

Finley has an irrational fear of hospitals because Past 1’s hospital has made the kid too fearful of places like that for they equal confinement and restriction or Past 2’s hospital tortured and traumatized Finley so bad that the kid has been rendered into thinking that hospitals are like prisons. So whenever Finley sees someone with a lab coat, or a nurse outfit, or sees anything that resembles a hospital room, one will see Finley screaming and running in terror or blow it to bits with the gun that suddenly appeared from thin air.


*Meeting people


*Literature (*
Favorite books are: Mary Shelley’s ‘Frankenstein’, 'The Bible,’ anything from Shakespeare, and maybe that of  Paulo Coelho's 'Warrior of Light')

*Tea and Coffee (likes both equally) 

*Pastries and desserts (especially crumpets, scones, macarons and tea cakes)

*Barnaby, an owl plushie who currently has Fin's x-hollow (Designed by DerpyBunnies What he looks like can be found over here: )

*Quoting Bible passages or anything read from many books

*Singing (Favorite songs: Chritina Perri’s Human, anything Vocaloids. note: Playlist found below. )


*Sunlight and warmth

*Paper cranes

*Belonging to a group of any sort

*The family that is the Fab
ulous Health Committee



-Hospitals (and anything that resembles its interiors)

-Strawberries (because Fin associates them with bewbs //shot )

- Being a cyborg

-Not being human


-Human anatomy

-Conflict and Arguments

-Unable to drink any beverages

-The idea of the Lady and Lord factions fighting

-Revealing clothing (short skirts are evil!)

-Cold and dreary weather

-Being deceived (or knowing about it)

-The Headmaster of Blue Crescent That is one bugger that is definitely off the trolley *shivers*


 † Trivia:

*Finley is a cyborg ((Information about this can be read here [because it's quite long]: )) 

*Speaks in articulate British Englishalso seeks to learn Shakesperian English :u

*Refers self as “Tracy” even if Finley is aware of real name.

*Can switch from male voice and female voice when singing.

* Prone to look down on oneself because being a cyborg is the equivalent of being a monster for Finley.

*Most likely to imitate fighting styles and call out attacks. Can also make own powers by mixing the ones learned but this takes time to master.

*The glass eye was something the pharmaceutical company in Past 1 or the hospital from Past 2 had implanted  after they damaged the original eye. Its blue because Finley had blue eyes before becoming a cyborg.

*Needs to get in contact with sunlight and other natural light sources to use Light Magic and to give the body energy. 

*Often wears clothes that covers the body because of the insecurity felt of being a cyborg. 

*When wearing anything casual, it will most likely be mori fashion beacuase its cute on Fin x33 //smacked

*The cloak Finley is wearing has an infinte pocket space in which Fin can stuff a large amount of objects whatever their amount or what their size.

*A person becomes truly special to Finley if the kid shows what is underneath the eyepathc which is currently an empty eye socket; the x-hollow is supposed to be there.

* Claims to be able to communicate with other plushies because of Barnaby (=A=;;; ) and sometimes leaves the glass eye (X-hollow) to Barnaby for safe-keeping

*Can eat anything hard but doesn't consume anything liquid in fear of being short circuited.

*Anyone with who possesses the Sun Arcana is capable of recharging Finley's solar charge levels ((lol //shot))

*Has a deep longing to belong somewhere, which is why Fin values the Health Committee for accepting and keeping the kid. 



*The Health Committee- Finley calls this faction 'family' and has sworn to self to do whatever possible to look out for the members, even though the child knows only a few of them. When faced with possible expulsion, Finley was devastated and so Finley has wholeheartedly promised Cici to trust their leader again in order to stay. 
*Cici- Respects the guy due to his ranks as being the president and commander of their faction, however, as Cici starts to get harmed from his latest set of actions (e.g. his murder before the 1st faction war), Finley starts to question his judgement. After a defeat from him during a battle royale, Finley promises to trust Cici's judgement, even when they will be questionable.

Cici knows of Finley being a cyborg due to having access of the students' health records. Finley refers to him as 'general' but has called him 'bloody twat' since recently.

*Headmaster- Someone Finley is genuinely fearful of. The best explanation Finley can give to being so fearful of the guy is this: "Headmaster is the highest of all highest authorities of an educational institute and must be feared off--err--respected--Respected!." But the truth is, Finley is just scared of the lolli shota and still looking for the answers to why. 

*Lucy- Still does not really quite trust her and wishes to ask if she is human or not. Secretly nicknames her 'The Hissing Girl' but noone knows about that yet. 

*Abellona- Sees her as a genuinely nice person that Finley hopes to get to know more of. Refers to her as 'miss Abby.' Thanks to her, she made Finley realize the importance of family and has achieved the ability of thought (thinking thoughts) because of the realization. 

She became the second person Finley sees as special when she offered to look after him during the time Finley was thought to be kicked out of the HC for facing Cici. 

*Puppy- Admires the loyalty and kindness he exhibits to his friends and appreciated the warm gestures he gave Finley during their first meetings. Addresses him as sir Puppy. Also Finley's partner during the Midwinter Pageant. 

*Gabriel- Was once shy at approaching the fellow Health Committee member (because the first time Finley saw Gabriel made the kid so flustered that it nearly drained what was left of Finley's battery), but has grown to be very fond of him. Finley supports Gabriel being with Cici and does everything possible to let them have as much time as possible.
However, with war approaching, Finley doesn't see it wise for the two to pursue a deeper bond. At least not yet ;33 //kicked.

He was the first person who Finley sees as special by letting him see what was underneath the eyepatch. Like Cici, he  too knows of Finley being a cyborg but Gabriel knew because of the elemental powers he has. 

*Lucien- Interested in him for the kemonomimi was the second half-beast Finley knows (the first being Puppy). Finley snapped when Lucien asked if Finley was human but Lucien was able to comfort the child with some special candy. 

*Lev- Thinks of him as a bit nutty but was able to open up to him anyway because of the boy's laidback nature. Finley refers to him as 'Lev-sempai' upon Lev's request during their first meeting. 

*Kazumi- Appreciates how she can help Finley fill in the blanks when Finley doesn't understand what has just happened. 

*Kazue- Doesn't know her much but, despite this, Finley gains an appreciation for paper cranes after she elaborated the legend of folding 1000 of them for a wish (For Finley: the wish is peace within the factions).

*Margaret- Received hair extensions and a simple hand mirror from her. Finley calls them treasures even when the girl called them nothing.

*Daichi: The only thing Finley dislikes about him is his fascination for the human body. Set that aside and Finley wants nothing more but to know more of the fellow bibliophile and faction member who has a few eccentric habits that can grow on a person.  

My app for the RP group, :iconxparadise-lostx:
I hope I get in.
I thank temiji for lending me the SAI I use that allowed for the textures on the gun ^w^ (salamat~!)
It took me three tries before I could get satisfied with Tracy's Deus and Doll forms (weapon included). I'm glad I got Tracy to look the way I wanna at last XD

xParadise-Lostx (c) :iconrenichii96:

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goingwithlove Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Woooow,,! Nice character!
temiji Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Ahh congratulations~~ and it was no problem :iconkonataplz:
Ahhh I hope to rp with you sometime~ :iconasdfghbeeplz:
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh thank you once again :iconjunesplz

Finley has yet to meet Lev so~ I'm looking forward to their meeting :giggle: 
Hope to rp sometime indeed :love: 
temiji Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014

Welp welp wanna rp?~//throws sleepy Lev//

Lev: :iconraisu-keiji: Good morning~...//collapse on the floor//
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconjunesplz: Finley's My body is ready!

Finley: *looks at who's fallen* Why jolly good to see you sir or miss *bows to the sleepy person*
temiji Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
pfffft-- :iconmingplz:

Lev: = u =//is half asleep// Aye aye sire~~//stands up// I gotta pee--//walks until he hits the nearby wall//
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Finley: *raise hand* Um pardon Tracy's interruption but the loos are over yander *points down the hall* 
temiji Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Lev: ....:iconkagepro40plz: who's Tracy?... oh I'm sorry//bows then looks at where Tracy's pointing//
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Finley: *raises hand* Tracy's Tracy. *glances as Lev makes his way*
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sigalawin Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Abby: Oh, another member of the Health Committee! Hello!!!
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Finley: Good day to you maam. You are the first female Tracy has met here in the Committee *bows* It's an honour to meet you  Tracy's name is Finely Caesidy but our general calls Tracy 'Fin'. Oh how cheeky of Tracy, Tracy forgot to ask your name maam.
sigalawin Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Abby: Ahaha, well-- there are only 2 girls in the Committee, after all!
Ah, and imma call you 'Finny' then~

Oh, my bad! My name's Abellona Laufeia, but you can call me Abby!

And it's great to have another person in the team! As of now.. we only have.. 7 members, including you! ^^; 
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Finley: Shocking. Tracy didn't expect that our faction had very few...Tracy must admit that everything feels very large in this academy.

Oh, yes, call Tracy anything you wish maam. Be it not anything aggravating, thank you.
And jolly good to meet you maam Abby.

Oh, anything the bother, maam? *blinks*
sigalawin Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Abby: Ah, well the reason I joined this faction is because I didn't want any fighting--! You? Why'd you choose HC? OwO

Naww, alright then! 'Finny' it is!

Oh, no! It's just... it'd sure be fun if we had MORE members! Think of it!

And.... you have a strange way of speaking, don't ya? Well, it's adorable! ;3;
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Finley: *giggle* Sir Puppy remarked on my manner of articulation too miss Abby. Tracy feels very pleased you find me acceptable even. *bow*

Oh answering  your first question: yes, Tracy felt thexsame way :) 
But also bevause Tracy cannot identify with the other factions very well when it comes to affiliation.  Oh of course I'm befriending many from the Lord faction fairly well. Tracyw hopes to do the same to some of the females in the lady faction soon .
sigalawin Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Abby: Teehee~ :iconasdfghplz: It's so cute, honestly!

Ah well-- The females in the lady faction are quite nice, I'm sure you'll get along well with them!
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Finley: Thank you fine miss.

Yes, Tracy hopes to meet nice ladies in the Lady faction soon. May they be as kind as you miss Abby :)
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TANblaque Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:bulletpink: Congrats ate Mari! Whoot whoot!
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:bulletyellow: Yeah XDD Thanks Tan2~!
TANblaque Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:bulletpink: Whoot whoot again! We are the pink and yellow bullet sisters! xD No hay problema~
choco-java Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student General Artist
dude, congrats on being accepted but can I ask a rather ridiculous request?

like....Add another/change the name for your OC starting with "F" "G" or "H"

you can ask why, I'll be happy to explain~
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I got acepted? :8D *head explodes*

And yes....whyyuyy? 

choco-java Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student General Artist
Well, the current members of the Health committee are:

Get it?
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're the head hancho of the Health commitee right?

Okay, but I warn you..Tracy isn't gonna be happy about this :iconheplz:
choco-java Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh, I doubt Tracy can do anything about it~...

Cici: So~! Newest member~...Welcome to the Health Committee! I'm Cici Astraia, your president and general~..
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, you have Finley Tracy's  boss~ :icondontunderstandplz:

Finley: Why hello there, general. Tracy's name is Finley Caesidy. It would be an honor for Tracy to be under your wing *stiff bow*
choco-java Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Cici: Oh! No need to bow, please!! ;;;

*clears throat*
Uhm...for the sake of the stability of my mind, can I call you Fin instead, Mister Tracy?
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Finley: Affirmative *swings self up*
:| *raises hand*
Tracy does not approve....deep down. *puts hand down*
However, you are my superior.
Tracy will allow general to call Tracy "Fin" 
*smiles briefly* :)
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lmbrake Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hope you get in~!
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks I hope so too (/7\)
TANblaque Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:bulletpink: Wow. Very detailed! I love the way you created this character! lol! British accent when Angry. xP
Wish you good luck and acceptance!
marimariakutsu Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:bulletyellow: thank you. And good show chap, jolly good show.  (Oh yes dont call it accent to the real Brits- they actually get mad at that 8/) ihave to admit some bits are crooked but im happy with the result..for now..
I hope so myself~ thank you god bless ^^
TANblaque Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:bulletpink: Oops. I beg your pardon..

God bless ~
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